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Wednesday, November 29, 2017

my magic box

I will put in my box
The tip of a whisker from a black and orange cat
An apple that has sailed the seas
A UFO that has jumped a planet   
I will put in my box
A pair of Yeezys  SPLY-350 that have lightning strikes on the bottom
A plane that can go 100 metres deep in the water
A sun that runs
I will put in my box
A line that can avoid everything
The first dog in the world
A book that always generates new words
I will put in my box
A 1000 year old Chinese wisdom speaker
A piece of chocolate that has jelly beans growing out of it
A  piece of paper that draws until I stop thinking
My box is fashioned by dragon scales from the darkest dragon
Its hinges are made from the stretchiest dinosaur egg
I will score the winning goal for Chelsea


2 comments:

  1. You have incorporated some amazing imagery that have put some wonderful pictures in my head. After our conversation on Tuesday I now know what Yeezys SPLY-350 are. Plus you have incorporated a picture. What do you imagine 'the first dog in the world' look like?

    I look forward to your next blog post.

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  2. hi eben it's mikael. I think that your magic box is really cool. I think that you could have made it a bit more colorful. I think that you should make the writing bigger next time.

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